Interesting...
The production is pretty good, it's clean and all. That and I really like some of the synths you used, it doesn't sound like typical DnB at all, and I find that refreshing. The drums are also pretty good, they're really dry, but it fits the song well, and they're nice and punchy too. There's also a ton of variation in your rhythms, which is always cool to hear.
But I gotta fault you for the chord progression. It's incredibly overused, and while it does fit the feeling you're going for pretty well, I would have liked to hear a bit more experimental-ness with your structure, as all other parts of this song are so unique sounding.
Overall pretty damn good though, and cool description too. Nice work.