not bad.
Not sure if you listen to much Noisia, but it really seems you were going for the feeling they did with their bootleg of Sweet Dreams, what with the DnB feel and pitch raised vox. (One hell of an awesome mix btw, it's on their myspace.) It sounds like you were trying to make this a lot more agressive than it came out too. The finished product sounds a little on the empty side, but a fatter bass can really help that out. Overall it's a cool idea though, and you managed to take a song that I absolutely despise and make me hate it a bit less, so props to you. (Really though, I liked it, that wasn't a jab.)
In conclusion, good job, you just need to fatten up your tone a bit.
PS: My life is busy as all get up, sorry it took me so damn long to review this. I've been planning to write a decent one for a while now.